Students in high school always look forward to getting to college, because they heard that college is a very free place. No rules, and you can do mostly anything you want. How much better will college be than high school? Most students think they have a lot in common. In my opinion, on the contrary they have a lot of differences.
One big different from high school, college life is more free. In college, you don't have to wear uniform anymore, you can wear anything you want. Unlike high school, you don't have to learn what you really don't like. In high school, you have to take any class that school set up for you. In college you can eat what you want to eat and what you like to eat, but in high school you just have no choice to choose what you gonna eat this afternoon.
Another different is the student organizations. In college, there are many different kinds of student organizations, you can join what you interested in anytime. Many student organizations members are so expect that you can join them, and they always make me feel that they are so enthusiastic and so kind to freshmen. For example, they will give a free class to student who want to join them, and student can use this chance to know about the organization and decide you want to join or not. In high school, students have less chance of choosing student organizations. Exactly, there are few student organizations in high school.
And you can get alone with different people from everywhere. When you are freshmen, you are probably live in the dorm, so that you can get along with your classmate easier. In high school, you have almost no chance to get along with other guy who are not in your class. In college you can even meet a foreigner as classmate, that's very different from high school.
Although high school life and college life are very different, they are both experience that we need to get through. There are many memories in my high school life, so does my college, what we have to do is enjoy the moment and keep trying new things to enriched our life.
At the end of the third paragraph, use "Indeed,..." instead of "Exactly,...".
回覆刪除In the fourth paragraph, it's "get along with" not "get alone with".
This is a good essay and it is well organized. There are still a few typos and misspellings, but in general this is good work!