Do you know how high a human can jump? Javier Sotomayor jumped 2.45 meters high and break the world's record in 1993! Everyone must have a special experience that makes him or her proud, and this experience is which I think proud of myself.
When I was an elementary student, my teacher asked me if I wanted to participate the high jump contest, and I answered YES without hesitation because I had dreamed of jump as high as I could for a long time, and I really wanted to join a contest for our elementary school, that must be very glory. There was a short training before the contest. I would grasp this opportunity.
During the training, I used my best efforts to do it. Whatever running or stretching...... These were once I hate most. I still try my best to do it, no matter how difficult it was to me. Unlike other kids, I sacrificed my free time after school almost everyday to practice for the high jump contest.
Finally, that day comes. The day that I await so long, but also afraid so much. My couch told me just keep a normal mind persisting on for a while, and you'll make it. I thought it was really hard to think like that, he never know how nervous I was!
It's my turn now, I remember I was number four, and I jump over smoothly for the round one, two, and three, and a few people get wash out. Round four will be the crucial point, If I jump over successfully I may got a prize. On the other hand, if I didn't, I'll get nothing. Guess what, I did it! And only three people get through this round, I was really lucky and also very surprised. At that moment, I was really proud of myself because I try my best and did it well!
Life is unpredictable, you can't konw what will happen nest. So just enjoy your life and catch the important moment, make it brilliant. This experience really surprised me, and also taught me that"As you sow, so will you reap."
This is a good effort Vicky! I like the positive story that you tell, and the final message -- to take advantage of every great opportunity. However, you still need to work on adding in enough connecting information, and building good, grammatical English sentences. Also, you need to keep track of tense. This essay should be almost entirely in the past-tense, but you revert to the present-tense quite often...
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