2015年1月6日 星期二

My unforgettable birthday

Everyone has a special birthday that diferent to others. How do you celebrate it? Somebody celebrate with family, and somebody celebrate with friends. They might eating birthdays cake together, or singing birthday song together. And what I am going to tell you is that the unforgettable birthday in my life.

It's a normal day to school, having my duty class. Everything is normal, nothing happened. It's like nobody remember that today is my birthday! Yes, I'm a little bit sad about this. I thought few of my friend will remember that.

Through evening, I was walking in the campus with my classmate. Suddenly somebody cover me with a big black plastic bag, and I was screaming. I just can't see anything but dark! They guide me to a room quietly, so that I cant distinguished who it was.

Surprise! When they take off the big black plastic bag for me, I saw all my friends in the room. I was really surprising found that they didn't forget my birthday. They also prepared a birthday cake, and singing a birthday song for me.

Then, my high school friend showed up! This is really surprise to me, and also very touching because I haven't see her for a long time, I really miss her, and I have no idea that she would come! She also bring birthday gift for me, it's my favorite cartoon—adventure time, Jake's bag! I love it.

As I am making a wish, one of my friend attached me with the butter from my lovely birthday cake, and this action cause war! Everyone was playing with the butter, and all the classroom was dirty, Im also really dirty because of the revenge! Athough my birthday cake was totally destoryed, everyone was happy at that moment, me too. I really enjoy this. This is a really unforgettable birthday in my life!

4 則留言:

  1. This is a good essay, narrative so clear.
    I also feel it is a unforgettable birthday, I am so happy that I join the same moment with you!

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  3. I like your essay because it let me want to know more about your bithday story. Good essay.

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  4. This essay tells a nice, heartwarming story. However, I think you need to be more careful about tense. The entire essay ought to be in the past-tense, but most of your sentences are formulated in present-tense...

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